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Feb. 25th, 2011 10:40 pmLost self, Dakota has lost part of himself; he has lost Bill. Bill and Dakota just happen to be in the wrong place at the wrong time, it was 2001 at 9:52 am. “The twin towers have been hit” says Dakota; as his mom is crying “Bill! Oh my God, Bill!” says Christen. As the twin towers are falling Bill is racing down a hallway even as it is tilting down from the plan crashing, ominously on his floor. Luckily the door to the other part of the hall way is open; he jumps and grabs the hand almost a second too late! “Oh crap!, the hinges are braking” Bill screams, so he pulls with all of his might and managers to spring up and catch the door frame…
“Dear god that was close” he murders to himself as he pulls himself up and walks to the other office that is still standing. Back at the house, Dakota and Christen call Bill’s phone. Ring, ring…ring, ring….(click) “ Dad?” quivering Dakota manages. “If you want your father back bring $1,000,000 by the end of the day or he will die” Click! Dakota runs out the door “Dakota, come back!” yells Christen; but he’s already gone. As the terrorists walks out of the room after beating and tying up Bill, the leave the room and lock the door.
Bill quickly Knocks the chair he is in over and begins to rub the rope together, thus causing friction. After 5 minutes rubbing the rope brakes shortly after…But by the time he tries to find a escape root; as the door is opening he slides and close the door with speed and puts the chair under the door knob. Before the brake open the door Bill has escaped through the window.
Bill is now running home, when he gets there the car is gone! He barges in, “where’s Dakota?!” says Bill. “Looking for you!” Says Christen. “Stay here and I’ll find him! “Says bill- “come back safe!” but he is gone before she finishes the sentence. Dakota is mesmerized by the destroyed office of his father… “Hay, kid!” –“ oh crap!” Dakota quickly runs to the elevator; as it closes shots are fired but the door closes in time for the door to block the bullets. He reaches the bottom floor; terrorist running from the stares. Luckily there out of bullets, ( form shooting the other workers in the offices) when Dakota brakes through the front door he slides forward to avoid gun fire from the army unit circling the entrance and as bullets light up the terrorists; “ Dakota!” yells Bill. “Dad!”… Dakota quickly runs toward his father jumping in to a massive embrace. “Your alive thank the lord!” Dakota manages while crying. “You’re not hurt!” says Bill with a smirch on his face. The both turn and watch the light show of bullets tearing the terrorist limb from limb and look into each other’s eyes and just smiled.
“Dear god that was close” he murders to himself as he pulls himself up and walks to the other office that is still standing. Back at the house, Dakota and Christen call Bill’s phone. Ring, ring…ring, ring….(click) “ Dad?” quivering Dakota manages. “If you want your father back bring $1,000,000 by the end of the day or he will die” Click! Dakota runs out the door “Dakota, come back!” yells Christen; but he’s already gone. As the terrorists walks out of the room after beating and tying up Bill, the leave the room and lock the door.
Bill quickly Knocks the chair he is in over and begins to rub the rope together, thus causing friction. After 5 minutes rubbing the rope brakes shortly after…But by the time he tries to find a escape root; as the door is opening he slides and close the door with speed and puts the chair under the door knob. Before the brake open the door Bill has escaped through the window.
Bill is now running home, when he gets there the car is gone! He barges in, “where’s Dakota?!” says Bill. “Looking for you!” Says Christen. “Stay here and I’ll find him! “Says bill- “come back safe!” but he is gone before she finishes the sentence. Dakota is mesmerized by the destroyed office of his father… “Hay, kid!” –“ oh crap!” Dakota quickly runs to the elevator; as it closes shots are fired but the door closes in time for the door to block the bullets. He reaches the bottom floor; terrorist running from the stares. Luckily there out of bullets, ( form shooting the other workers in the offices) when Dakota brakes through the front door he slides forward to avoid gun fire from the army unit circling the entrance and as bullets light up the terrorists; “ Dakota!” yells Bill. “Dad!”… Dakota quickly runs toward his father jumping in to a massive embrace. “Your alive thank the lord!” Dakota manages while crying. “You’re not hurt!” says Bill with a smirch on his face. The both turn and watch the light show of bullets tearing the terrorist limb from limb and look into each other’s eyes and just smiled.
